Human After All- Prologue

Hi readers and dear friends,

Hope you are all enjoying The New Year and have not broken your resolutions already. If you have that’s okay. There will be several more opportunities to make and keep them in the future.

I am presenting before you a story of mine that I wrote a while ago before my first novel. Some of you are familiar with it. It bears a special place in my heart because it helped me discover the writer inside me. Hope you like it 🙂

HAA 1

HUMAN AFTER ALL

Human After All is a phrase I picked up from a favorite song of mine by Level 42. It struck me as being so basic yet poignant to the human condition that I had to make it the underlying theme of my story. So while reading and pondering about the goings on I’ll ask all of you to keep it in my mind, that we are all ‘Human After All’– liable to make mistakes, jump to conclusions, have misunderstandings and be generally crazy!

So here’s a brief intro of our protagonists:

Khanak Agarwal is a young, sincere, hardworking doctor who truly believes in the essential goodness of mankind.

Shantanu Khandelwal is a Harvard educated architect who is ambitious and leery of developing lasting relationships with women. That is until he stumbles into our heroine.

PROLOGUE

Why does it always have to happen this way? Why do I always have to be last in line for the loo? Why do they discriminate between economy and other classes? Do they think we have better bladder control?

“No ma’am you can’t come in here. This is business class.”

Khanak couldn’t control her urge any longer and began hopping from one leg to the other; “You don’t have to tell me that. I know very well this is business class and that is the why I’m here! Please can I use the rest room? Back there, it’s like a zoo!”
“No ma’am, I’m sorry but you have to wait. Those are the rules!”


“Who are you to tell me the rules? When nature calls you have to obey! If you don’t allow me in here, I may have an accident and you’d be responsible, not me!”

The German stewardess who looked clearly flustered decided to give in and let Khanak use the rest room. Anyhow it was empty. Khanak nodded her thanks and breathed a sigh of relief, thankful that her ruse had worked, or else… She didn’t want to think about it.

***

“Oh! We’ll be landing in forty minutes! I better finish these pooris. Though they are more like cardboard in consistency but we shouldn’t waste anything, should we son? When they charge us an arm and a leg for each seat!”

Shantanu nodded relieved he didn’t have to tolerate Mr. Gupta’s company for much longer. He had found the New York to Germany segment reasonably amusing with no one in the adjacent seat and a very beautiful blonde stewardess at his beck and call. The only sore point had been that his favorite magazine had decided to dedicate its latest issue to women! Women in business, politics and other professions. He hadn’t found a single article that concurred with his POV. That women are the weaker sex and good for only a couple of things. What had the world come to?

Then plump Mr. Gupta had joined him in Frankfurt and had been so delighted to sit next to a fellow Indian that he had chosen to enlighten him with his life story in not so few words. Despite Shantanu’s best efforts to show his disinterest, Mr. Gupta refused to be dissuaded until he fell asleep, But then his snoring akin to a steam engine passing through a tunnel, kept everyone awake.

Shantanu turned up the volume on his headphones wondering how someone could talk and eat at the same time. Beethoven’s 9th thundered in his ears. It was one of his favorite symphonies. As he began to lose himself in the final crescendo, he felt someone roughly jolt his shoulder. He opened his eyes irritably and saw Mr. Gupta clutching at his thick throat. He was choking!

Serve him right! was Shantanu’s first reaction yet when he saw the man’s eyes start to bulge he panicked and hit the call button. The beautiful blonde made her appearance almost immediately but when she saw Mr. Gupta she called for assistance. A big burly steward shook the poor man by the shoulder and asked him something unintelligible. Mr. Gupta didn’t respond because he was in extremis. He started clawing at his throat.

“He needs a doctor now!” Shantanu yelled as he watched his companion’s plump face turn a bluish hue and beads of sweat pour down his face.

“I am a doctor! Move out of the way!” A petite slim Indian girl announced with a very authoritative voice as she shouldered her way through. She had said the magic words. The burly German who dwarfed her willingly stood aside.

“Are you choking?” she asked Mr. Gupta. When he nodded, she made him stand up and positioned herself behind him. Shantanu didn’t know how she accomplished it but she encircled Mr Gupta’s huge chest with her arms and thrust repeatedly inward with her fist. On the third try a large piece of brown stuff flew out of his mouth and he started coughing loudly and color rapidly returned to his face.

Everyone smiled and breathed a collective sigh of relief as Mr. Gupta indicated he was fine. Then they all pumped the girl’s hands and thanked her profusely.

Dhanyawad beta, you saved my life. I don’t know how to show you my gratitude,” Mr. Gupta said.

“It’s alright sir. I was just doing my duty, that’s all. I’m happy I was around and I could be of help.”


“Help?!
That’s an understatement! What you did was a miracle!” Shantanu chipped in having been a silent witness so far.

She turned as if noticing him for the first time. She wasn’t much older than mid or late twenties and had the most beautiful jet black eyes. But now they were looking at him with scorn, “Mister, if you wish to call it a miracle, you can, But it’s all in a day’s work for doctors like me.”

Mr. Gupta butted in, “Beta! At least tell me your name and address, so I can send you a thankyou gift.”

“Dr. Khanak Agarwal, and sir, your thanks is a gift in itself.”

She walked away with her head held high and without giving Shantanu a second glance. Women didn’t do that when it came to Shantanu Khandelwal. He was intrigued.

tbc

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11 thoughts on “Human After All- Prologue

  1. Aasma

    yayyyyyy simi im soooo glad your posting this story, i think it holds a special place in all of our hearts, especially since weve been there since the beginning and seen tou flouriah as a successful writer.
    May god bless you, and you always have my prayers with you
    MWAH
    x

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  2. Roshni

    Omg omg omg!!!!
    And im back as soon as i saw HAA… <3
    Its been sooooooooooo long…..
    I luuurrrvvveee this shanak…..
    I missed them so damn much!!

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  3. DAISY

    Omg omg omg
    M i seeing right
    Simi updating HAA again
    You will not believe it i was missing HAA since 2 days and as soon as i was free from some work i was going to search for it & start reading it again
    Its like u hv read my mind like telepathy lolz

    Its the 1st story that i hv read any story FF on shanak & thats hw i got introduced to FF’s and read many more
    But my 1st love is HAA and i read all ur other stories from HAA became fan of ur writing

    I love all ur stories simi thats why i want you to complete all ur stories with a proper ending don’t leave in middle simi

    Thank you soooooooo much for posting it again i know its incomplete too but ofcourse u cant give it a proper ending now but happy to read it again ☺

    Hope u post regularly & dont leave it in middle Thats the only thing i worry about you

    Thank you once again ☺

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  4. Priaa

    Purani yadein taza hogayi……what else I can say. It’s like watching your baby growing all over again.
    Awaiting the next part soon.
    Good day dear.

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  5. DIVYA VIJAYAN

    HEY WOW !!!!!!!!! DR..NEW STORY..
    SO DIS WAS UR FIRST STORY..
    READING IT FOR 1ST TIME..THANKS FOR WRITING THE SAME..
    LOOKING FORWARD FOR IT..
    PROLOGUE IS AWESOME…

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  6. Heer

    My favorite HAA the one which i never missed it
    I love this story alot
    Thank u Simi di for giving us HAA back
    This story gives me smile on my face imaging shanak
    I cant forget during my sch break i used to read it and smile alone
    Thank u once again
    Will try to be regular here as i was in ur blogs.

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  7. sudha shree

    Wow! Simi di… New story! I m so excited!
    U know what i m actually fond of doctors… I always wish to marry a doctor… Hehe… Here, khanak is a doctor.. Interesting… Not only that… She is beautiful too… Ahaan!
    Is it gonna be a love at first sight for Shantanu??
    I m sure i m yet again gonna adore your protagonists… These two will also make a lovely pair…
    So what next? Our hero Shantanu is gonna chase for her & fall in love with her?
    I m all set to read this story dear…
    Please do let me know whenever u post… Nothing can give more pleasure than reading ur stories…

    P.S – sorry for the delay in commenting… I read the update when i was in college & thought to comment when i return home but i forgot… Sorry…

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  8. sudhaguda

    OMG!!!!!!
    Thank you Simi for posting HAA *hugsssss* 🙂
    HAA is the first story I read on IF and I love love this Shntanu and doctor Khanak 😉
    Because of this story I got to know about you and your wonderful style of writing
    It brought back wonderful memories of that time
    love you

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