The Surface
—o—
We operate
You and I
We nod, we converse, we agree
We go about our business
On the surface
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The chinks
They show on occasion
But we conceal them
Expertly shroud them
On the surface
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And those who dare
Peep beneath
They rear aghast
At the rife ugliness they see
A cauldron of noxious brews
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Of voices falling on deaf ears
Of conflicting emotions
Of affections forgotten
Of relations trivialized
Of promises broken
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Yet it all appears just fine
On the surface
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sorry havent been active but i promise give me a hitbof time until mid june and after that i promise i will always comment looool
Babe cant really comment through my phone but loved all ur updates, ur dong such a good job.love seeing this side of ur writing… Wen u going to continue shanak storys loool Xxxxx
Wow aasma! I was wondering about you just today! Thanks! Have been very busy too. But I did update II- did you get to read?
loved it
Nice one.. 😀 Loved it..
Thanks!:)
this was a lovely one!! also loved the previous on!! could relate to both the poems Simi!!
Thank U Tulika!
love it like the pic 🙂
but u know sometimes i get scared seeing water swimming aata hain toh bhi
I can understand Jalis. 🙂